Kireji Explained

are a special category of words used in certain types of Japanese traditional poetry. It is regarded as a requirement in traditional haiku, as well as in the hokku, or opening verse, of both classical renga and its derivative renku (haikai no renga). There is no exact equivalent of kireji in English, and its function can be difficult to define. It is said to supply structural support to the verse.[1] When placed at the end of a verse, it provides a dignified ending, concluding the verse with a heightened sense of closure. Used in the middle of a verse, it briefly cuts the stream of thought, indicating that the verse consists of two thoughts half independent of each other.[2] In such a position, it indicates a pause, both rhythmically and grammatically, and may lend an emotional flavour to the phrase preceding it.[3]

List of common kireji

Classical renga developed a tradition of 18 kireji, which were adopted by haikai, thence used for both renku and haiku,[4] the most common of which are listed below:[5]

Use

Hokku and haiku consist of 17 Japanese syllables, or on (a phonetic unit identical to the mora), in three metrical phrases of 5, 7, and 5 on respectively. A kireji is typically positioned at the end of one of these three phrases. When it is placed at the end of the final phrase (i.e. the end of the verse), the kireji draws the reader back to the beginning, initiating a circular pattern.[7] A large number of hokku, including many of those by Bashō, end with either -keri, an exclamatory auxiliary verb, or the exclamatory particle kana, both of which initiate such a circular pattern.[8] Placed elsewhere in the verse, a kireji performs the paradoxical function of both cutting and joining; it not only cuts the ku into two parts, but also establishes a correspondence between the two images it separates, implying that the latter represents the of the former,[9] creating two centres and often generating an implicit comparison, equation, or contrast between the two separate elements.[10]

The hokku author must compose a syntactically complete verse capable (alone among the verses of a linked poem) of standing alone, probably because the hokku, as the first verse of the renku or renga, sets the stage for the rest of the poem, and therefore should not leave itself open to overt modification in the next verse. The conventional way of making sure that a hokku has such linguistic integrity is to include a kireji.[11] [12]

In English haiku and hokku

Kireji have no direct equivalent in English. Mid-verse kireji have been described as sounded rather than written punctuation. In English-language haiku and hokku, as well as in translations of such verses into this language, kireji may be represented by punctuation (typically by a dash or an ellipsis), an exclamatory particle (such as 'how...'), or simply left unmarked.

Examples

The examples below are laid out as follows:

Mid-verse ya

行く
yuku haru ya tori naki uo no me wa namida
go spring bird crying fish 's eye as-for tear

End-verse kana

ひやひや ふまへて 昼寝
hiyahiya to kabe wo fumaete hirune kana
cool so wall (accusative) put-feet-on siesta how

Notes and References

  1. http://www.haiku.jp/haiku/nyumon_English_03.htm Brief Notes on "Kire-ji"
  2. Nobuyuki Yuasa. Translating 'the sound of water' , in The Translator's Art, Penguin, 1987, p.234
  3. [William J. Higginson]
  4. Haruo Shirane. Traces of Dreams, Landscape, Cultural Memory, and the poetry of Bashō. Oxford University Press, 1998. (pbk), p.100
  5. Higginson and Harter, pp.291-292
  6. Makoto Ueda, Modern Japanese Haiku, University of Tokyo Press, 1976, pbk. p.265
  7. Shirane, p.100
  8. Shirane, p.312
  9. Shirane, pp.101-102
  10. Haruo Shirane and Lawrence E. Marceau, Early Modern Literature, in Early Modern Japan, Fall 2002, p.27
  11. Steven D. Carter. Three Poets at Yuyama. Sogi and Yuyama Sangin Hyakuin, 1491, in Monumenta Nipponica, Vol. 33, No. 3. (Autumn, 1978), p.249
  12. Konishi Jin'ichi; Karen Brazell; Lewis Cook, The Art of Renga, in Journal of Japanese Studies, Vol. 2, No. 1. (Autumn, 1975), p.39