The Black Vulture Explained

The Black Vulture
Written:1909–1910
First:March 1910
Cover Artist:James Arthur Cahill
Country:United States
Language:English
Genre:nature

"The Black Vulture" is a sonnet by American poet George Sterling first printed in March 1910. The poem was cited by Thomas E. Benediktsson in his book George Sterling as "a sonnet which became Sterling’s most consistently praised and most anthologized poem."[1] Poet and critic William Rose Benét wrote: “As for ‘The Black Vulture,’ I think it is one of the finest sonnets in the language.”[2] The New York Times said: “No finer sonnet has been written for many a day.”[3] In American Literature, professor Robert G. Berkelman called it “one of Sterling’s most enduring achievements and certainly among the memorable sonnets in our literature.”[4] After the poem’s first book publication in 1911, reprints of “The Black Vulture” in newspapers, magazines, and books have kept it almost continually in print for more than a hundred years.

Creation of the poem

“The Black Vulture” is a Petrarchan sonnet of fourteen iambic pentameter lines. George Sterling first titled his poem "The Californian Condor"[5] or "The California Condor."[6] Sterling wrote the sonnet in 1909 and sent "The California Condor" to his mentor Ambrose Bierce for review.[7] Bierce responded:

  The only fault I see in this is the abrupt change in the "point of view" in the first few lines from the man's to the condor's. In the first line he is "a mote" (seen from below)--the reader is on the earth. In the third line the reader is with the condor, looking down. Isn't that pretty "sudden"?
  The "roads between the thunder and the sun"--that is great![8]

Sterling sold his sonnet to Sunset magazine, which printed it as "The Condor" in its March 1910 issue, six years and three months after the Wright Brothers’ first flight.[9] The magazine put a color painting on its front cover of Sterling piloting a biplane (which in real life the poet never did) while wearing a red necktie (which the poet did do, and which in those days proclaimed the wearer to be a socialist). "The Condor" was reprinted by the Sapulpa [Oklahoma] Sunday Light.[10]

Next, as Bierce suggested, Sterling changed his poem's first line from "A mote upon the day’s immeasured dome" to "Aloof within the day’s immeasured dome," made three other small changes, and retitled his revised sonnet "The Black Vulture." He included it in his 1911 poetry collection The House of Orchids and Other Poems.[11] Sterling later changed his first line's "immeasured" to "enormous," resulting in three slightly different versions of "The Black Vulture." His final revision is the version provided here.

Text of the poem

Interpretations

What is “The Black Vulture” about? The cover-assigning Sunset editor and the New York Times Book Review editor seemed to agree that the poem celebrates aviation. The Times editor wrote that people had written many poems about aviation, “but we have not happened to see any other poem, having this new art or science as its theme, in which the subject is treated with so much imagination and such literary skill as have gone to the making of “The Black Vulture.”[12]

Many readers drew other conclusions. Like all of Sterling’s 500-plus sonnets, “The Black Vulture” has a first section about one topic and a second section about a related second topic. Some readers of this poem felt the first section shows nature from the soaring predator’s lofty point of view, while the second section regrets people trespassing in nature.

Other readers arrived at other interpretations. High school seniors given “The Black Vulture” described a variety of points of view. One concluded: “While he is sitting on top of the world, he is not concerned with the affairs of the people beneath him.” A second senior wrote: “Worldly heights and worldly storms are nothing, and human endeavors are controlled by a black vulture—Fate.” Another elaborated: “The solitary vulture looks down from his high home on the life below him, and he thinks of man least of all though it is man who plans to execute his own dream by sharing the high dominion with the vulture.” Another said he or she thought: “From his position in the sky, the Black Vulture looks down upon the other mighty birds, the sunset, and the mountains. He looks with contempt on man and man’s dreams. This vulture, or Death, little realizes that men in their adventures have no fear of him.”[13]

That the black vulture was Death and the poem expresses mankind’s quest to avoid it has been the view of several readers, including leading historian-critic of fantasy and horror literature S. T. Joshi, who called "The Black Vulture": "a grim portrayal of the all-destroying power of Death."[14] One college student’s vehement insistence on the “Death interpretation” drove his English professor to ask Sterling what this poem means. Sterling replied:

“The Black Vulture” is a nature-poem pure and simple. There are few poems into which some kind of symbolism cannot be read, with a little imagination—and a good many where symbolism was intended. But I am not guilty in this case.
  The folk of the Santa Lucia mountains call our California condor “the black vulture,” and once, when on the Big Sur river, I saw one of the great birds poised a mile or more overhead. They are larger even than the Andean condor, their wings spreading over ten feet in some specimens. It’s a fine of $1000. for shooting one, as the bird is very scarce and becoming rarer yearly. I doubt if there are 20 in all California. They range from the Big Sur (a mere stream) southward into Mexico.[15]

Critical response

The poem's reputation mushroomed in 1911, when a New York Times editor saw "The Black Vulture" in Sterling's book The House of Orchids and Other Poems and was impressed. He placed the poem as the New York Times Review of Books front cover's lead item and praised the sonnet as showing "much imagination and literary skill."[16] Weeks later, the New York Times Review of Books printed "The Black Vulture" again, this time with its review of The House of Orchids and Other Poems, stating, "No finer sonnet has been written for many a day."[17]

After the New York Times highlighted “The Black Vulture,” dozens of newspapers around the country reprinted it—even one in England. Almost half the papers also reprinted the Times’ praise of the poem.

In other publications’ reviews of The House of Orchids and Other Poems, some reviewers singled out “The Black Vulture.” Poet Joyce Kilmer, in Literary Digest, decided: “By writing ‘[A] Wine of Wizardry’ and ‘The Black Vulture,’ George Sterling earned the gratitude of all lovers of poetry."[18]

In 1917, the Book Club of California asked Sterling to select out of all his sonnets his favorite thirty-five to include in an artistically designed, limited edition book, Thirty-Five Sonnets. Sterling chose "The Black Vulture" as one of his favorites.[19] Six years later, Sterling again chose "The Black Vulture" when New York publishing firm Henry Holt and Company asked Sterling to choose from all the poems he’d written in his first 25 years as a poet to form a collection of his Selected Poems.[20] Reviewing that book in the New York Post, poet and critic William Rose Benét wrote: “As for ‘The Black Vulture,’ I think it is one of the finest sonnets in the language.”[21] Poet Robinson Jeffers encountered the poem in a poetry anthology and wrote to Sterling: “Your ‘Black Vulture’ stood out in it like a mountain peak.”[22]

American poet Leslie Nelson Jennings, called by critic Stephen Philips "perhaps the most versatile and splendid maker of sonnets America has produced," wrote the sonnet "Condor" as a companion poem to Sterling's, even echoing the description "mote" Sterling used in his "The Condor" first version.[23] Originally titled "But You Sat Silent," "Condor" was first published in 1925 and was reprinted several times.[24]

Later critics offered more varied opinions. In 1933, University of Oregon Professor Ernest G. Moll said that among recent sonnets “stand two great sonnets, “The Black Vulture” and “Aldebaran at Dusk” by George Sterling”, citing “The Black Vulture,” “because in it the poet has achieved a complete mastery of form, because of the splendor of its images, and because of the modern ring of its thought.”[25] In 1973, historian Kevin Starr said Sterling's verse "occasionally possessed a sub-philosophical relationship to local materials and a passion for transcendence which forecast the achievement of Robinson Jeffers. Sterling’s sonnet ‘The Black Vulture’ suggested a mode which one wishes had been more characteristic."[26] Thomas E. Benediktsson, in his 1980 book George Sterling, suggested this "sonnet was popular in part because it was not, like most of Sterling’s poems, disparaging of human progress; American poetry in 1911 was still very much in the service of Uplift. Furthermore, ‘The Black Vulture’ is much more available than Sterling’s more allusive and ‘classical’ poems."[27]

After Sterling's suicide in 1926, "The Black Vulture" received a small final flurry of magazine and newspaper reprintings, including the poem's third appearance in the New York Times.[28]

Voices: A Journal of Verse then printed a memorial tribute to Sterling, which well-known editor and poet Leslie Nelson Jennings wrote. He had known Sterling. He made his tribute a Petrarchan sonnet like “The Black Vulture.” Jennings seasoned his sonnet with echoes of Sterling’s poems, including “A Wine of Wizardry” and “The Quarrel” (about baking bread). The bright red star Aldebaran appears, used by Sterling in “The Testimony of the Suns” and “Aldebaran at Dusk.” Jennings titled his memorial tribute “Vale” (the Latin word for farewell) and began it with “The Black Vulture.” (In the second-to-the-last line, Jennings’ word “air” means a song.)

In the year 2000, when the prestigious Library of America published its anthology American Poetry: The Twentieth Century, the poem chosen by its editors to represent George Sterling was “The Black Vulture.”[29]

Reprints

Sunset magazine first printed "The Black Vulture" (titled "The Condor") in its March 1910 issue. After that first appearance, Sterling's sonnet was reprinted many times in printings and editions of newspapers, periodicals, and books, keeping "The Black Vulture" in print almost continually for more than a hundred years.

Reprints in newspapers

Reprints in periodicals

Reprints in books

1910s books

1920s books

1930s books

1940s books

1950s book

1960s book

1970s books

1980s books

2000s books

2010s books

Adaptations

Monument

In October, 2003, a plaque with the text of "The Black Vulture" was installed at 2080 Addison Street, Berkeley, California.

Notes and References

  1. Book: Benediktsson . Thomas E. . 1980 . George Sterling . English . Boston . Twayne . 1980 . 101.
  2. William Rose Benét, “Four Poets,” New York Post Literary Review, (August 18, 1923), p. 27.
  3. “A Poet Who Finds Himself: Mr. Sterling’s Success in His Latest Volume of Verse,” New York Times Review of Books (June 25, 1911), p. 400.
  4. Robert G. Berkelman, “George Sterling on ‘The Black Vulture,” American Literature, v. 10 n. 2 (May, 1938), pp. 223–224.
  5. "The Californian Condor" manuscript in the University of Virginia Library: Book: Sterling . George . George Sterling . Joshi . S. T. . S. T. Joshi . Schultz . David E. . 2013 . Complete Poetry . English . 2 . New York . Hippocampus Press . 2013 . 713 . 9781614980506.
  6. Typescript hand-corrected and signed by Sterling with handwritten comments by Ambrose Bierce, Albert M. Bender Collection of George Sterling Papers, Book Arts & Special Collections, San Francisco Public Library.
  7. Sterling either mailed the sonnet to Bierce January 5, 1910 with a group of poems Sterling had written before Christmas 1909 (which Bierce returned January 29, 1910), or mailed the sonnet to Bierce earlier in 1909 with a group of poems Bierce returned October 9, 1909. See Bierce January 29, 1910 letter to Sterling, The Letters of Ambrose Bierce, Bertha Clark Pope [and George Sterling, uncredited], eds. (San Francisco: Book Club of California, 1922), pp. 158-159; Sterling January 5, 1910 letter to Bierce, Dear Master: Letters of George Sterling to Ambrose Bierce, 1900 - 1912, Roger K. Larson, ed. (San Francisco: Book Club of California, 2002), pp. 198-200; Bierce October 9, 1909 letter to Sterling, Letters of Ambrose Bierce, pp. 155-156.
  8. "The California Condor" typescript.
  9. George Sterling, "The Condor," Sunset v. 24 n. 3 (March 1910), p. 243.
  10. Sapulpa [Oklahoma] Sunday Light (May 1, 1910), p. 11.
  11. Book: Sterling . George . George Sterling . 1911 . The House of Orchids and Other Poems . English . first . San Francisco . A. M. Robertson . 1911 . 30.
  12. “Books and Authors,” New York Times Review of Books (May 7, 1911), part 6, p. 1.
  13. Arthur Willis Leonard and Claude Moore Fuess, Practical Précis Writing (New York: Harcourt, Brace, 1929), pp. 51–52.
  14. S. T. Joshi, “Introduction” to George Sterling, The Thirst of Satan: Poems of Fantasy and Terror, S. T. Joshi, ed. (New York: Hippocampus Press, 2003), p. 14.
  15. Sterling letter to Professor Robert G. Berkelman, April 27, 1925; quoted in Robert G. Berkelman, “George Sterling on ‘The Black Vulture,’” American Literature, v. 10 n. 2 (May, 1938), pp. 223–224.
  16. "Books and Authors," New York Times Review of Books (May 7, 1911), part 6, p. 1: "Many a minor poet has had his shot at aviation; but we have not happened to see any other poem, having this new art or science as its theme, in which the subject is treated with so much imagination and such literary skill as have gone to the making of “The Black Vulture," reprinted on this page from Mr. Sterling's The House of Orchids. The sonnet might have been written by William Walton."
  17. "A Poet Who Finds Himself: Mr. Sterling’s Success in His Latest Volume of Verse,” New York Times Review of Books (June 25, 1911), p. 400.
  18. Joyce Kilmer, "Current Poetry," Literary Digest v. 49 n. 19 (November 17, 1914), p. 903.
  19. Book: Sterling . George . George Sterling . 1917 . Thirty-five Sonnets . English . first . San Francisco . Book Club of California . 1917 . 8.
  20. Book: Sterling . George . George Sterling . 1923 . Selected Poems . English . first . New York . Henry Holt . 1923 . 159.
  21. William Rose Benét, “Four Poets,” New York Post Literary Review, (August 18, 1923), p. 27.
  22. Jeffers 1925 letter to Sterling: Robinson and Una Jeffers, The Collected Letters of Robinson Jeffers: 1890–1930, James Karman, ed. (Palo Alto: Stanford University Press, 2009), p. 524.
  23. Stephen Philips, "The New Lyricism," Poetry Review v. 21 (1930), p. 119.
  24. First printing as "But You Sat Silent": Voices: A Journal of Poetry v. 5 (1925). Reprinted Harrisburg Telegraph (April 3, 1925), p. 10; San Bernardino Daily Sun (April 6, 1925), p. 10; Atlanta Journal (April 12, 1925), p. 24; Poetry Review v. 21 (1930), p. 120. Reprinted as "Condor": Leslie Nelson Jennings, Mill Talk & Other Poems (New York: Fine Editions Press, 1942), p. 32.
  25. Book: Moll . Ernest George . 1933 . The Appreciation of Poetry . English . New York . F. S. Crofts . 1933 . 237–238.
  26. Book: Starr . Kevin . Kevin Starr . 1973 . Americans and the California Dream, 1850–1915 . English . New York . Oxford University Press . 1973 . 0195016440.
  27. Book: Benediktsson . Thomas E. . 1980 . George Sterling . English . Boston . Twayne . 1980 . 101.
  28. New York Times: (Nov. 8, 1926), section 10, p. 16.
  29. Book: Hass . Robert . Robert Hass . Hollander . John . John Hollander . Kizer . Carolyn . Carolyn Kizer . Mackey . Nathaniel . Nathaniel Mackey . Perloff . Marjorie . Marjorie Perloff . and . 2000 . American Poetry: The Twentieth Century . English . 1 . New York . Library of America . 2000 . 72 . 9781883011772.
  30. Richard Stöhr, "The Black Vulture," op. 110 "Zwölf Lieder" ("Twelve Songs") for voice and piano no. 8 (1944–1945).